Fancy websites that don't work
đȘ Beautiful design. Clever copy. Dead-end offer.


Hey there!
I used to obsess over having the perfect website⊠clever copy, slick branding, a full menu of services.
But the more polished it got, the less it worked.
This week, I was reminded about the role a website actually plays in your businessâ growth and overall success.
So in this issue, weâre breaking down what your website actually needs to do, why your offer comes first, and 3 simple edits to make your site convert more of the right people.
Letâs get into it.

Earlier this week, a client DMâd me:
âJay! I just had a call with a friend of mine.
Her offer is a complete mess. You have to help her.â
I replied, âWhy, whatâs up?â
She replied with the friendâs website.
I opened the link, spent 10 seconds, and replied back with, âOh. Yeah. Lots of help required.â
Before I dig in, I should preface â I honestly donât care much about websites. Not these days, anyway. Theyâre way down on my priority list.
Which is why I still donât have a proper one for my own business.
But all bets are off once a website screws up its one job â to create a simple, inviting front door to your offer.
And in this personâs case, their front door was more like walking into a timeshare presentation by accident.
Every sentence was âwe.â Every paragraph was a monument to the teamâs brilliance.
The services page looked like it was built for a procurement audit, not a human being in need of help.
Thing is, nobody is looking at your website trying to figure out how you help. Theyâre showing up mid-crisis.
Theyâre wondering: âDo you get what Iâm dealing with?â and âCan you make it go away?â
But when I first met with this future client, they thought weâd work on developing more services and tuning the site.
But when you canât easily explain what you do or why someone should care... itâs not your site that needs work, but your offer.
Your website isnât the business, itâs the front door
Your website is one of many tools youâll use to attract and convert right-fit clients.
Itâs job is to make it easy for the right person to say, âYes! This is exactly what Iâve been looking for.â
That means your website isnât the star. Your offer is.
The site just clears the path to it.
Done right, your site makes the visitor feel:
Seen
Safe
Curious enough to take one step closer
Done wrong, it makes them feel like theyâve walked into a conference booth where someoneâs about to pitch them on âinnovation.â
So letâs fix it.
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